Dialouge

Abr. "Do you bite your thumb at us, sir?"
Sam. "I do bite my thumb, sir. "
Abr." Do you bite your thumb at us, sir?"
Sam. "Is the law of our side, if I say ay?"
Gre. " No. Sam. No, sir, I do not bite my thumb at you, sir, but I bite my thumb, sir. " Gre. "Do you quarrel, sir?"
Abr. Quarrel, sir! no, sir.
Sam. If you do, sir, I am for you: I serve as good a man as you.
Abr. No better.
Sam. Well, sir. Gre. Say “better”: here comes one of my master’s kinsmen. Sam. Yes, better, sir.
Abr. You lie. Sam. Draw, if you be men. Gregory, remember thy swashing blow.
This passage is humorous in the way you can feel the tension building. I liked the little aside to Gregory asking about the law.

My own dialouge
“I can’t Babe you know that. In a couple of years I’ll have more money than you can imagine, I just got to work my way to the top.”
“I hate that lifestyle Billy, I have to worry every night what your doing or who your with. Do you know how hard it is to sleep when all your thinking about is the person you love being shot or arrested over something as stupid as drugs.”
“Well those stupid drugs paid for that gold necklace you have on right now did it not?” Billy was referring to the gold played necklace he had bought her for her birthday, it was shiny looking necklace, and Billy could see himself in the reflection of it. The necklace spelt out her name Maria in script, and Billy had put a little heart of the “I” in her name.
“I just want us to get out of here out of the ghetto; do you want our children to grow up here?” “Children, what children, I’m not having any children.” Billy said with a baffled face.
“O shut up, you know you want me to have your children.”
Billy smiling said, “I don’t know what you’re talking about, I’m never having kids ever!” “Whatever Billy you can be such an ass.”
“You know I’m jus joking, give me a kiss Babe.”